Play book
That Rebel Yell's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Flow & Clarity | #46 | 3.025 | 3.100 |
| Adherence to Theme | #47 | 2.928 | 3.000 |
| Concepts & Originality | #49 | 3.269 | 3.350 |
| Overall | #51 | 3.074 | 3.150 |
Ranked from 20 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Insanely fun escape sequence. Feels like the start of something longer! Great work!
What a fun little escape sequence, I love it!
“plan b?” “on fire.” that tells me everything i need to know about this crew. messy, loud, and somehow still operational. good fun.
Some technical issues, needs another read through with a mind to fixing the grammar and getting rid of some logic issues.
That said the bones of the story are good and I could see this being the opening to a book about a rebel group fighting for the freedom of their planet.
Yah, original was longer, polish was lost while hacking it to fit.
Seemed fine at 1am when I submitted it, probably should've re-read it at a sensible hour.
I get that, happens to me all the time as well ^^ - definitely a fun read though still