The presentation is fantastic. It pairs really well with the way you've written the text. I really liked the brief adventure structure you've supplied. I think it's a great example for what's possible with the system. Most of the supplements I read while writing my entry focused less on the traditional "meat" of the adventure in favor of evocative world building (which is also nice), but I appreciate you giving some more focused direction on how to present the scenario to the players at the table. That's something that really helps new GM's and players.
Thanks for the feedback. I, too, wrote a lot of settings in the past, but today i prefer to focus on the "meat" and i think a one shot is a good way to present the game.
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The presentation is fantastic. It pairs really well with the way you've written the text. I really liked the brief adventure structure you've supplied. I think it's a great example for what's possible with the system. Most of the supplements I read while writing my entry focused less on the traditional "meat" of the adventure in favor of evocative world building (which is also nice), but I appreciate you giving some more focused direction on how to present the scenario to the players at the table. That's something that really helps new GM's and players.
Thanks for the feedback. I, too, wrote a lot of settings in the past, but today i prefer to focus on the "meat" and i think a one shot is a good way to present the game.
This is AMAZING, love how you've incorporated the degrading systems and beautiful presentation.
Thanks, making things "simple" was quite hard, and the presentation is a big part of it.