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Fantastic personality through the dialogue on this one. It's a bold gamble to have so many characters in a one-pager, but I think you run with it really well! 

The dialogue fleshes out each individual in good time for the word limit which is great, but clustering them all into single paragraphs does make parsing them a little difficult. 

Does the HH in your mood board's window mean anything?

The dialogue really shines as a light in the dark setting. I do wish it was a little easier to follow who was talking when. 

I liked it! Interesting choice

Really interesting read, at times a little hard to tell who's speaking but I love the characters, you manage to give them life in a very short amount of time. Kudos!

rook is the sort of character who gets away with being funny because the story knows exactly how tired he is. good banter, worse circumstances. very sharp little piece. great work.

The dialogue alone carries so much personality and wit, every line does double work. Rook especially - what a character.

Good job!