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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Flow & Clarity | #13 | 3.739 | 3.739 |
| Adherence to Theme | #29 | 3.174 | 3.174 |
| Overall | #30 | 3.377 | 3.377 |
| Concepts & Originality | #51 | 3.217 | 3.217 |
Ranked from 23 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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this has a nice kind of doomed clarity to it. almost a faustian bargain, but uglier and more personal. the central choice is strong, and the story keeps orion trapped between greed, love, and the consequences of both. the ending is grim in a way that feels earned. really well handled. loved it.
I'm glad you like it, thank you very much for your feedback!
That was a great read, thank you for sharing it!
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Insanely well written. A solid diplomacy story with a solid punch of a bleak ending. Fantastic work!
Thank you very much!
An easy and enjoyable read.
Thank you!
Oh what a gruesome ending! I wasn't entirely sold on the theme of impossibility, the whole deal seemed altogether plausible. Which is a credit to you as a writer, you've made your characters very believable and overall I enjoyed reading this story!
Thank you very much for your kind words!
Really engaging read!!
The kind of story where you think you know where it's going and then it just pulls the floor out.
Good Job!
Thank you, glad you like it!
Well written, with a very "twisty" ending.
Thank you!