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A jam submission

No Escape - OPR Writing Jam #14View project page

An assassin closes in on its target. A one page story set in OPR's Grimdark Future setting.
Submitted by Toastmortem — 17 hours, 19 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Flow & Clarity#143.7143.714
Adherence to Theme#153.4763.476
Overall#203.5403.540
Concepts & Originality#393.4293.429

Ranked from 21 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Host

Hello, thank you for participating in the Writing Jam #14! Please email customers@onepagerules.com, to claim your participation minis!

Submitted(+1)

Fantastic choice, making the governor our POV, delightfully grim dark. Pretty solid pacing and descriptions as well. Overall, a great read! 

Submitted(+1)

nothing humbles a tyrant faster than discovering the panic room was only a smaller place to be hunted in. loved how the piece turns “you’re safe here” into the exact moment you know he absolutely is not. strong imagery, very easy to picture, and a very satisfying conclusion. well done

Submitted(+1)

On point for the Theme, 

Well done! I loved the description, especially the eyes. Put me right there with the governor staring down this impossible foe. 

Developer

Thanks! I'm very glad you liked it.

Submitted(+1)

Very grimdark, well done.

Developer

Thanks!

Submitted(+1)

Mmmh, tasty murder. I don't really know what this retribution is about but I am not about to start an argument with an angel of death. Great story, vivid writing!

Developer

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate the kind words. :)