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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concepts & Originality | #11 | 3.909 | 3.909 |
| Adherence to Theme | #18 | 3.409 | 3.409 |
| Overall | #21 | 3.515 | 3.515 |
| Flow & Clarity | #33 | 3.227 | 3.227 |
Ranked from 22 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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A fun escalating disaster for our characters, with also a few fun little tongue twisters. "A most pungent of travesties" might enter my daily vocabulary in the future. Fantastic work!
Ooh, I loved this. A giant whale as a comedy utensil gives me Monty Python meets Hitchhiker vibes, though there could be some editing done for a smoother ride. There's overuse of the word "swarm" as well, but after a while it became a bit of an absurdity and I was smiling the whole time.
Gizhundheit! Marvellous! And the image of the exploding whale carcass in the mood board is *chef's kiss* Though I have questions about humans and demons working together so casually, this was a very enjoyable read!
Well this is Havoc Brothers (specifically Change vs Plague).
That was a fun and short little story. Love the take on the theme
very funny little disaster. the escalating failure of every solution worked well, especially once the plan became āmake it someone elseās problemā and somehow got worse from there. gross, silly, and fun work.
Hilarious
Love to see a clever sense of humor in these jams. What a hilarious after-the-credits concept, even if there were a few repeated points (the swarms, the birdman, Irridia's concerns) I very much enjoyed the tone-even though I was sitting here shouting "Fire! Fire!" like Beavis.
This could totally be a short film! Thanks for the dark humor š
I'd love to aninate it in the future. Maybe add more details.