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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Flow & Clarity | #3 | 3.913 | 3.913 |
| Overall | #11 | 3.667 | 3.667 |
| Adherence to Theme | #14 | 3.478 | 3.478 |
| Concepts & Originality | #29 | 3.609 | 3.609 |
Ranked from 23 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Very Comedy of Errors in a way. Could see this sort of story being done as a radio show, or a short stage adaptation with a very frazzled gunner.
Thank you! I'm very fond of farce.
walker trusting three hundred tons of gun and armor, only to be betrayed by systems, dice, and finally a safety switch. classic bad rolls, honestly. variance is normal, but this poor tank got the full lecture. perfect final click. fun work.
Thank you! It was just the poor old girl's time...
I could feel the pain of rolling so, many, ONES in this story. That Havoc Brother was certainly blessed by someone alright.
Thanks! He must worship the famous Havoc god RNGesus.
Really solid story with a terrific sense of tension and claustrophobia.
Thank you!
A very fun action story based on maybe someone who had some rotten roles while playing the game. Especially appreciate that ending. Great work!
Based off of too many someones, honestly... Thank you!
That was a lot of fun!
Thanks!
Did somebody get some unlucky rolls in a game against Havoc Brothers? This feels very relatable for sure. Love the subtle but clear approach to the theme!
Thanks! I think it's happened to everybody in one way or another.