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Death, Guardian of Life's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concepts & Originality | #19 | 3.783 | 3.783 |
| Flow & Clarity | #25 | 3.478 | 3.478 |
| Overall | #28 | 3.391 | 3.391 |
| Adherence to Theme | #50 | 2.913 | 2.913 |
Ranked from 23 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Hello, thank you for participating in the Writing Jam #14! Please email customers@onepagerules.com, to claim your participation minis!
Vampires, Lizards, and Demons, oh my! A fantastically fun story where you somehow manage to balance all three factions really well. Fantastic work!
Thank you! I would love to expand on for the Mission contest on the second half of the year!
Plenty of fun! I’ll admit, the middle was a bit of a head scratcher.
Definitely would be served best with a sequel; the quicker, the better.
what do you mean by head scratcher? haha English is not my first language and would love to understand better!
Yes! I am planning on expanding a full on campaign with a mission designed for the next OPR Mission Jam!
From one vampire fan to another, great job!
thank you! anything you'd like to see more on the vampires that follow Ezio?
I really enjoyed that, thank you!
Very cool! Unexpected pairings but an interesting "4d chess move." I'd love to see where this goes.
Thank you! I'm looking forward to expanding the story
Very interesting concept and matchup. It was a lot of talking for my taste but I am hungry to learn where Ezio's journey takes him now. Very nice entry!
thank you! I think balancing dialogue with action is something I could have done better, but it was a challenge with such a short amount of words to work with. What would you have done differently?