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Fool's Gold's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Flow & Clarity | #20 | 3.562 | 3.650 |
| Overall | #26 | 3.416 | 3.500 |
| Concepts & Originality | #27 | 3.611 | 3.700 |
| Adherence to Theme | #37 | 3.074 | 3.150 |
Ranked from 20 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Hello, thank you for participating in the Writing Jam #14! Please email customers@onepagerules.com, to claim your participation minis!
Pretty fun, light read. Great atmosphere as well. Could see a series of shorts about these two. Nice work!
I love these two.
Heh, I wonder what became of them. Apart from a missing word or spelling mistake here and there this was a fun little read!
Oh that was a delight to read through. It really was a fun ride.
Thanks! Thrilled that you enjoyed it.
always nice when a story understands that the real danger is not the cave-in, but the person beside you holding the explosive. good banter. and a very dwarf-shaped kind of bad decision. fun work.
Thanks!
You really captured the spirit and the feel of the DG well here. It's almost a "George and Lennie" pairing in the characters. Well written!
Thanks so much!
Really enjoyed Fool’s Gold! The atmosphere, pacing, and dialogue felt very natural, and the story fit the OPR universe perfectly. The ending was especially strong and memorable.
Thanks! Very happy that you liked it.