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Blessed Heretic's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concepts & Originality | #31 | 3.605 | 3.789 |
| Adherence to Theme | #39 | 3.054 | 3.211 |
| Overall | #43 | 3.204 | 3.368 |
| Flow & Clarity | #50 | 2.954 | 3.105 |
Ranked from 19 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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A fun read. I love a little apostasy!
It is always nice to see real representations of the "gifts" given by the plague father. The memes are great but sometimes you need a reminder at how horrible those "blessings" are.
A very solid introspective story. Maybe a 2nd pass or draft to clean up a few grammar errors here and there. Other than that, fantastic work!
There were a decent amount of grammatical errors—this could’ve benefited from a second pass in editing.
Besides that, I really liked the story. Lots of quiet, introspective character work this Writing Jam.
Nice to see the plague boys get some attention. Great work!
I enjoyed this story. Now, there are some technical issues with it - some grammar and punctuation mistakes - but overall the writing is straight forward and to the point. There is no time wasted and I feel like, with another read through and some minor corrections "Blessed Heretic" could really shine.