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A jam submission

AUTHENTICATION ERRORView project page

an ONI commander authenticates a lie older than the empire
Submitted by kksisk — 2 days, 15 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Concepts & Originality#133.9044.000
Overall#443.1883.267
Adherence to Theme#542.8302.900
Flow & Clarity#542.8302.900

Ranked from 20 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Host

Hello, thank you for participating in the Writing Jam #14! Please email customers@onepagerules.com, to claim your participation minis!

Submitted

Got a quarantine flag warning trying to download the pdf - did anyone else get this message warning?

Submitted

Not entirely sure what is the impossible thing here to be honest. But it is an interesting log read. Hard to figure out what is going on beyond the surface.

Submitted

Nice formatting and a very excellent mood. Feels like a document/story you would read in an actual army book or video game. That said, there is a lot more at play here than what one would expect on reading through it for the first time. Fantastic work! 

Side note: Got a Quarantine alert for the PDF, not sure what that was about, but it works for setting up the atmosphere haha. 

Submitted

A really inventive and effective format for the story you’re telling here! I was surprised by how oddly endearing the ONI was, given its voice was always very rigid and mechanical. Great bit of introspective character writing.

Submitted(+1)

Really loved the setting and internal voice. The inner monologues of characters has been spectacular this Jam.

Developer

Thank you. I enjoyed your story as well

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Developer

Thank you for reading it!!

Submitted(+2)

good use of the log format here. the voice stays controlled, but the meaning keeps leaking through the cracks. nicely done.

Developer

Thanks, I appreciate that. I'm glad it landed well. Looking forward to see your story too

Submitted(+2)

Man, I love this concept. I have to admit I didn't really get where you were going at times but the vibes are on point. Keep it up!

Developer(+1)

Thank you. This is my first entry. I tried to make it unique. I would check out your story too