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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Adherence to Theme | #6 | 3.855 | 3.950 |
| Overall | #12 | 3.643 | 3.733 |
| Concepts & Originality | #13 | 3.904 | 4.000 |
| Flow & Clarity | #37 | 3.172 | 3.250 |
Ranked from 20 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Fun story with a clever take on the theme. The fonts and formatting got a little confusing at points, but very enjoyable overall
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I liked this a lot, good job really leaning into the robot logic. The one note I’d give is to trust your readers, there are a couple of places here where you probably didn’t need the explainer (most notably the” best human analogy…” part felt a bit jarring). It’s a good thing though, that means your writing is doing the heavy lifting without needing to explain!
Great advice, thank you!
This was really fun, thank you!
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Extremely good way to write robots.
Thank you! It was fun to put together.
Ths was a really fun entry, I really enjoyed reading it :)
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
A lovely visceral opening, though I wish it had a tad more of that at the end. Still pretty cool Robot Legion read.
Thank you for the feedback, that's some good advice.
That was great! Really the only thing was that it took me a moment to understand who was speaking, it could have been formatted a little more clearly. This is a very cool take on the Robot Legions however, I love how very alien and inhuman you've managed to make them. Awesome stuff!
Thank you for the feedback, much appreciated!
cool story. the legion really got defeated by its own calculation. won the battle, lost the spreadsheet. cold little idea, and a very fitting take on impossible. great work.
I really enjoyed this story! It's a very creative take on the theme.