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A jam submission

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Submitted by grimmm — 24 days, 17 hours before the deadline
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(3 edits) (+1)

Hey! I played your game about 10-15 minutes.... i cant remember, wich... is a good singn.


okay the great things first: 

1. Athmosphere. Its really strong, the music underlines it perfectly, the graphics are working. It kind of unsettleing to play this... in a good way.

2. Turn based Figthing sys. its Fun. Its really easy to understand, each character having his own abilites, being important for the player. 

3. Gameplay. to walk arround in this.... kind of maze like, Substructure. the slow walk. The (1.) athmosphere. collecting abilites. (ref1)


something thats good and bad:

The Unkown. exept of the good desinged menu and intro, you dont know anything about the game. it puts you rigth into it. wich is good to keep the athmosphere but, it feels like i missed a tutorial. (connect1)


allthougth, your game has some sligth downsides:

1.Linear gradient/ctr shader. the shader makes the game look good. retro. but it makes the small text unreadable from afar. this is why I also did not read the ability text untill i was near dead at the first boss.

2. Lore?. (connet1) Fist I am a red spike, than i am a dark person, than I am figthing a giant.... thing? and I am 3 dark guys? I did not really get what its about in the first 15 minutes of playing it.

3. Well.. there is no bad 3th thing but a good one. Could not find any bugs except the giant spider... wich as spider probably doesnt count as bug.


ref1: In general i think its a good game idea. getting lost in a labiriyth, figth the bosses, really cool.


I Had a great time playing your game. also the title sounds good weather its ORGIN or ORGIN_ 

The Trailer for you game is also really strong. Its the first trailer i saw on itch that is not only 1 video of gameplay.

and the reason why I picked your game to playtest first is: the visuals, how it catched my eye at the Cover, the screenshots. 

Keep up building your game. rn its a 3.7/5 


Greetings, Cookie-Crumb


(just saw its your first project here... wow. thats crazy)

Submitted(+1)

i Like the Style of this game is really good ngl, but the opinion i have if the game has an intro or what the game is about , because i did not understand the game until I searched the game page . just little into in the game will be good but the good is realy good matched the SFX i love the style of the screen !

Developer(+1)

Thank you for your comment ! This is my first actual game attempt so i wanted it to have some story, a beginning and end and not just gameplay. Did not turn out how i wanted, but i really appreciate your feedback and will try harder on my next game !!