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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Conceptual Cohesion | #5 | 3.333 | 3.333 |
| Technical Execution | #5 | 3.667 | 3.667 |
| Creativity | #6 | 3.333 | 3.333 |
| Visual Impact | #6 | 2.667 | 2.667 |
| Overall | #6 | 3.250 | 3.250 |
Ranked from 3 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Description
Bat like creature inhabiting a castle on the mountain where they are used to send stuff to people
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The idea is really creative! A bat courier living in a high-altitude castle is a cool twist on a sky island setting. Giving it a mask/goggles makes sense if it's flying through harsh mountain weather. It's a unique character concept.
I would recommend sketching the whole body next, giving it clearly bat-like wings, and maybe adding a little messenger bag or a tiny letter in its claws to show the 'delivery' part.
Thank you for your feedback. This was my first jam, so I didn't know much what to do.I did study bat anatomy to sketch the whole thing and add detail like bags for delivery, a compass for navigation etc but im still beginner-ish in drawing and design so i had a hard time fitting all things together neatly so i just settled for a basic idea of face that time
I hope you come back to completing it. You have a strong grasp on perspective, so I think you'll do great!