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A jam submission

a nervous traveler’s notebookView game page

Submitted by game, she made — 10 minutes, 39 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Art#254.4744.474
Limitation#353.6843.684
Overall#1223.2283.228
Gameplay#1632.8422.842
Polish#1722.7892.789
Theme#2063.0003.000
Audio#2132.5792.579

Ranked from 19 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

The art style is gorgeous, I love the textures on the buildings! And I really enjoyed the surreal feeling atmosphere. I do think it could use some more audio and sfx though. 

Unfortunately, I also got stuck after the coffee brewing mini- game.

Submitted(+1)

I loooove the art style, it is unique and it gives a real atmosphere to the game. Also you managed to successfully make the owl threatening, even to me who knew that the game wasn’t to be trusted. I only talked to it after the coffee bug made me reset the game, thinking “well, I could retry to do some coffee, that might bug again, or I could try to do the “stupid thing”, to go talk to that big menacing folk, and see what happens. So to me, you successfully put the player in the shoes of the protagonist. Everything is unknown, it is hard to trust those people, some of them being really menacing, but you have to overcome your fear, you have to risk giving that trust to progress. That’s really well done

Now, be careful on the font you use, it is barely readable at time on web browser (To a point I had to guess what might be written). I tried to zoom, but it didn’t help. :/

Submitted(+1)

This is such a unique game! I'd love to see more of it.

Submitted(+1)

I love the mix of the art styles and the weird vibes I got from the world. Genuinely startled me when the owl character came chasing. The parsing of the dialogue by clicking in the little circle is a bit difficult (maybe pressing a button might've been easier) and I think the font is a bit hard to see. I see that a lot of other people have said the game goes dark after making coffee and I experienced that too. Overall great atmosphere!!

Submitted(+1)

I really love this artstyle and vibe so much!!!! I really hope you continue expanding this because I'd love to play more. After making coffee I'm unable to progress though which is an issue I saw other people having too sadly :[ Regardless, I enjoyed what I was able to so far! :D

Submitted(+1)

I really liked the uncanny art style! The only thing I have to say about it is that having some music would probably be nice, something that could emphasize the eeriness of the game.

Submitted(+1)

Your art style blew me away, I live the abstract character designs and mixed media feel. This was dripping with intrigue! The dialog system was broken for me  (or maybe I missed a twist), so I don't think I could get to the secret society ending!

Submitted(+1)

Excellent art, funny humor and I actually got hooked after the first lines, I really like it, unfortunately the game goes dark after making coffee :(

Submitted(+1)

Very unique visual style!

Submitted(+1)

The art style is very cute and so creative. I tried to make coffee and I wasn't able to progress, unfortunately.