I think it still needs some processing. I like the idea of adding small games to a VN, looking forward to seeing more of your works!! (the sound effects are quite frightening lol the characters speak like guns. I think you can use some game engines or plugins specifically designed for visual novels btw)

This was hilarious. The music kept restarting with each time I hit the continue button, and the screen was cropped. I'm also not sure how this really matches the themes, but good job getting something done!

Lol. But I can't see in what way this is fitting the theme.