I enjoyed the game. I made the mistake of using A and D at first and I thought something was wrong with the controls but with the arrow keys it felt much better.  I like the dialog system you have in there. More obstacles would help change up the game play and make it more interesting but for a platformer I had a good time.

This has the bones of a pretty good first platformer, and the story that's going on is neat. Mainly just the player needs some reworking, very floaty, also idk if it's intended but you can just hold space and fly. Nice concept tho, could be a solid platformer with some polish.