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A jam submission

The Voice in the ShedView game page

A short story to pass time while you're waiting for your train.
Submitted by RyleeChoris — 1 day, 18 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Narrative#12903.3284.000
Artwork#70112.4963.000
Enjoyment#71582.4042.889
Creativity#75432.5893.111
Audio#101611.1091.333

Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How does your game fit the theme?
In my game, a count down occurs through the objects that two characters exchange. Plus, the player at the beginning of the game is waiting for their train.

(Optional) Please credit all assets you've used
See description for full credits

(Optional) What would you like to be called if GMTK features your game?
Rylee Choris

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Comments

Submitted

Good story! I really enjoyed the mixed media and seeing renpy always makes me smile!

Developer

Thank you! Using mixed media was fun ^^ and I had renpy downloaded for weeks and weeks now so it was nice to finally do something with it! >:D

Submitted

When the child screamed i got a shiver down my spine.  Good story.  i liked the mixed art style,  not all games can pull it off.  i wish there were more possible endings but with the time you had you did amazing.

Developer

Nice to hear it spooked you a little >:) Thank you!

When writing the script I thought as well about the various ways the story could go in, the choices the player could make, but like you said - limited time, so... I tried to focus on the main storyline ^^

Thanks for the feedback!

Submitted

I loved the story! I have to know how it ends!! 

A few minor things: a couple of typos here and there (nothing that proofreading won't fix!), I got no audio (not sure it it supposed to be?)

I really enjoyed the storytelling, and yes you are definitely an artist!

Developer

Thank you! I must admit I intended it to end with the scream - a little bit like a creepy pasta?

I'll have to recheck for the typos, thanks for letting me know! And yeah no audio in this story, maybe I'll add it later: we'll see ^^

Thank you again for your comment and your kind words!