This is a cool concept and well written (particularly the box text). The solution to exiting the city however is currently pretty much impossible for players to find which is the biggest problem. 

There could have been more thought given to treasures and encounter design. I'm being a bit more critical than I might usually be, just because when it's a paid product, you do expect that extra bit of leg work in terms of the boring stuff: treasure placement, maps, interesting encounters and most importantly good clues for solving the puzzle.

Hello  The Legally-Distinct Heckfire Club! Would you please create eight download keys for your game and submit them to jorphdan@gmail.com so I can get your entry to our judges! Thank you!