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A jam submission

The Delicate Diamond - Appendix N JamView project page

A Diamond that protects the Realm has gone missing. Find it or the girl who stole it.
Submitted by Noseatbelts — 1 day, 12 hours before the deadline
Rated by 35 people so far
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Submitted(+1)

Rich in flavour and with a wordbuilding that's actually useful for the gameplay, without be to removed from vanilla Cairn. I fear it could be a little railroady and quantumogrey, mor maps would have work better for me. All in alla, a strong, pleasant and well studied entry

Developer(+1)

Thanks for the kind words. I agree with just about everything you said, but time and space constraints got the better of me. 

Submitted(+1)

There’s so much worldbuilding packed into this, and the ending with the destruction of the diamond sounds like it could be really cool to run!

Submitted(+1)

Running the Fallen City is clever, would be cool to see the Foundry Points expanded on but that is some easy prep for a Warden. I might suggest using a different color for the hyperlinks, the green on black was just a little hard to read. Otherwise, the graphic design is really beautiful. The choices for images were perfect. Very well-written, good premise and I like how it unfolds.

Submitted(+1)

The visual design brings out a great atmosphere, almost newspaper-like (especially at the start, where that works really well). I really like your overland adventure content, but think it would really benefit from an expansion to flesh out the foundry / city of the dead. Great work :)

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