Ooh this is fun, a great opportunity to learn about a  creature I was unfamiliar with! The Layout and presentation is solid, with the only issues being some typos and the darker blotch on the background of page 2 onwards  making a few words hard to read. The map is serviceable, but perhaps slightly too dark, some more contrast to it, or a purely black and white one would have worked better, I think!

The structure of the mystery is well done, the scene is set clearly and there is a tense atmosphere painted throughout. The location keys are succinct and informative and just enough info is provided to get this easily parsed and at the table quickly! some more use of italics alongside square brackets would be useful for distinguishing the hidden information a bit more, but what is there works well.

Great stuff!

This is a fun mystery with a lot of investigative avenues in a tight package. I love the werewolf and garlic misdirects. Very well done.

I am always so happy to see scenarios that are not just run of the mill dungeons, especially for Shadowdark. This is essentially a complete description of Drusig and its residents, plus some tension to mess them all up! 

I think that my nitpick here is that a load of two-column texts means a lot of pre-parsing to use. This could easily be expanded beyond the Jam format into a small zine and it would sing.

This adventure is loaded! You have the complete descriptions of the town and it's people, and the mystery that surrounds it. I like that it guides the GM to the finale, and eventually fight our boss. Stat blocks are awesome. Solid entry overall. Great work!