I really like how clean and easy to parse your entry is. This is going to be very easy to run at the table, which is what matters most to me about adventures, whatever their other merits might be.

I also like that each encounter has something to interact with.

Nice clean map as well.

I'm not sure about the title font you use throughout. It suggests either a computer glitching out or sand being blown by wind, neither of which really match what's happening in this adventure. 

There are also a few typos it'd be worth stomping when the judging period is over.

For next year -- and I hope you enter again next year! -- I would lean more into the weirdness of Appendix N, which isn't really present here.

But overall, this a nice little gameable adventure that would fit in nicely in a River of Night campaign.

Great variety of challenges. Irritating vines for one example. Of course the chameleon flowers are awesome. I found the story and writing engaging and it’s the perfect scope for 3 pages. Love that you used von Zzyzx illustration! Will run this for sure. Well done. 

It's a compact, linear pointcrawl with a good setting choice. Every location is well defined and easy to use. 

I have a doubt about a phrase: in Area 2, it says if you distrub the pollen you Lose 1d4 INT and 1/hour for one day DC12 CON or slip into a beatific stupor. I am not sure how to read it you mean you lose 1d4 int now and 1 point per hour if you fail the save? That's a lot... perhaps it's missing something and you lose hp instead? Not sure, would appreciate an explanation.

I really love all the environmental details and the creative ways they can both be hindrances and helpful

Eye catching cover, I like that the module is very clearly formatted and set out - making this  easy to print and run at the table. Also great that each main area has something interesting happening on top of your random encounters list! Great jungle crawl! 🌹

People have already pointed out what I enjoyed the most. Can just say I think it would be blast to playthrough with my buddies. 

What a delightful dungeon crawl! Pretty straight foreward/linear, too, for the party that just wants to smash some heads without giving a thought about any effects the plants could have :-D

This is great, boss, amazing! I appreciate the low-ink design and the bold words of choice, so my attention span is checked.

Others have already described this module’s strengths and I agree with them: it has a strong concept it embraces fully, it has some nice decision points and is definitely very usable out of the box. What I don’t like is the map: it’s far too linear for my taste and, while it absolutely conveys the claustrophobia of a dense jungle, it doesn’t give much changes to get lost or prepare an ambush, two other things I’d expect from both the setting and the idea.

This is the sort of module I pick up when I have a specific theme in mind. If you need more Jungle, more Viperians, more CS4 (specifically for Shadowdark) this is going to be a pick up. 

I enjoyed the Flowers of the Chameleon in particular!

I love the cover art and the vibes, it really feels like a dangerous jungle where you're better off not touching anything. Simple hook and very useable without additional prep, and nice encounter table!

Well-designed. The longer I sit with it, the more I appreciate it. For a relatively linear space, you've included some interesting decision points. I like too that you've done a more flora-forward jungle adventure than most I've seen; trusting the random table to provide the monsters is a smart move in a space like this.

This is already one of the most usable out-of-the-box modules I've read here, but if you do another pass, I'd suggest adding an indication of encounter frequency (unsafe/risky/deadly).  That's my only note!

A usable, concise adventure. I do wish the map weren't so linear; I'd add a few loops to give players a chance to make some choices. Though I realize that, with just 7 rooms, you can't go too nuts with that. Nonetheless, I'm a fan of this. And it has a great cover!