Hello, I am currently working on a market research test for a game-concept we are working on. We are looking to have metroidvania players/story game players as a target audience, but we still are looking to validate this. We are looking for players to tell us why they DON'T like our game!
Link to itch page (controller first): https://freakyfrogstudios.itch.io/theoverside
feedback can be passed onto us in these comments and our dm's, be sure to ROAST us as hard as you can!
When you think that the script for your demo/game is finalised, please have, if possible, a native English speaker make serious corrections and adjustments to the spelling, grammar, and sentence structure. It reads like it was written by a novice rather than a professional, which is probably true because you gents only recently became developers. but still.
Perhaps some players would enjoy the aesthetic, but it just reminds me of old flash games from the early 2000s: meaning that they don't appear rustic and charming, but rudimentary and amateurish. Throw them out and start over.
Aside from that, just keep improving your craft. The systems, physics, etc that are still in their first, stiff iterations will improve as you do, after you continually adjust them or rewrite and reimplement them.
I hope that wasn't too mean-spirited. Those are my initial dislikes without the usual filter of politeness. Bye!
