I made Pegdive, a pachinko incremental game, The feedback i got at first was that the game was obtuse and didnt explain itself too well so i made a onboard tutorial. 

I'm looking for someone who can open the game and play it for 5-10 mintues to see if the onboard now explains everything well, no download needed you can play on browser, even if the game runs smoother on PC

Also i would like other criticism about everything, from graphics to music to gameplay or even balancing, but my main focus is the onboard tutorial 
https://e-51.itch.io/pegdive

Also if you are a dev and want me to review your game after you review mine just tell me and ill do it as soon as i have some time to do it.