This is a really good start. The set up includes some interesting choices encouraging the player to explore the ship. The exploration leads to discovering a solution to an issue, which is satisfying, and makes use of a change in state, which is good. I think the story could benefit from something a little more unexpected than what is encountered here. It's pretty straight forward once the player explores and finds a power sources, there's not added challenge or unexpected events, something like that could make the story more exciting.
I like the direction you're headed with the game, however I agree with the feedback that the games a 'little bare bones.' It would be nice to have some visuals and extra detail.
I liked how exploratory this game was. The narrative could be more fleshed out, but I think that's expected given that this game is still in development. Otherwise, I enjoyed clicking around and interacting with different choices. Some parts, such as turning on the engines, felt like I was interacting with a computer console. Perhaps you can add images that provide visuals for what I'm interacting with (location, objects, ETC).
This feels a little bare bones. I'd like to see things fleshed out a little more, I like that there is a clear objective, and a path to completing the objective. Functionally, everything is great here, but a little extra in presentation here would go a long way.
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This is a really good start. The set up includes some interesting choices encouraging the player to explore the ship. The exploration leads to discovering a solution to an issue, which is satisfying, and makes use of a change in state, which is good. I think the story could benefit from something a little more unexpected than what is encountered here. It's pretty straight forward once the player explores and finds a power sources, there's not added challenge or unexpected events, something like that could make the story more exciting.
I like the direction you're headed with the game, however I agree with the feedback that the games a 'little bare bones.' It would be nice to have some visuals and extra detail.
I liked how exploratory this game was. The narrative could be more fleshed out, but I think that's expected given that this game is still in development. Otherwise, I enjoyed clicking around and interacting with different choices. Some parts, such as turning on the engines, felt like I was interacting with a computer console. Perhaps you can add images that provide visuals for what I'm interacting with (location, objects, ETC).
This feels a little bare bones. I'd like to see things fleshed out a little more, I like that there is a clear objective, and a path to completing the objective. Functionally, everything is great here, but a little extra in presentation here would go a long way.
It feels very unfinished. Perhaps you could add images to help fill the game up more??