“Non ! Rien de rien. Non ! Je ne regrette rien !” That caught me off guard. You guys are really cultured xD I think your game has earned a sweet spot in my heart. The art, the music, the little animations, the writing, the minigames, the story, and the characters all pulled me in. It’s just magnifico! GG! ❤️

I got the blue ending! The framing of the story is so brilliant. We first start with Frederick chained up right before his trial, before showing the the whole story. This builds suspense and gives reader an expectation of what is going to happen next. If it had started with the family backstory, the player won't be as engaged/paying as much attention! Learning Frederick backstory helped the player build empathy towards him, and make it seems that his plan is justified. The two mini games inbetween the story telling provide some good variety to the gameplay, though I think adding a third one for Luclus for consistency would be better. The music suits the story very well, and the sfx combined with on screen effects/transitions keep the storytelling engaging despiting having no voice acting (BTW I used the same main theme for my entry as well!).

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I find that each character is very well crafted! Daniel wanted attention, Luclus want praise, and Marco had difficult father. All of them are understandable and well conveyed to the reader! Frederick's plan to kill each of them escalates from a simple kill to an epic dual, which contributes a lot to pacing! The letter was a theme throughout the story, showing that it is the letter that killed the the brothers, not Frederick's free will. This twist works great because the player already sympathize with Frederick and want him to have a good ending. One feedback I have is that the for how much Dorothy weighs in the blue ending, the most memorable part about her is only the testimony. It felt like she is just there to prove Frederick is happy at the end. 

But overall, I think this is a very good entry! Best one I played so far!

I liked this game, the writing and art is really good. Great job

I like the presentation of the story through the visuals and audio, really helped set the tone! I do enjoy compelling nobility dramas and I found the psychological aspects interesting. Even though the MC clearly didn't think too highly of his family, the turn of events definitely had a major impact on his conscience, which makes perfect sense given the situation.  In the way of constructive criticism, I have to admit I'm not a fan of the of the font as I found the all caps hard to read as narration/dialogue. Especially when it was in bold lettering or the colors changed. I think adding an opaque textbox (or at least including it as an option) might make it a little more reader friendly. These are easy enough to fix though. :3