Cool vibe but not a secret lake for me! First track is better compositionally to me but feels pretty muddy on the low end. I like the intro to the second track a lot, created a cool mood with the samples/sfx, but ya lost me in the second half. Nice work!

Good stuff. Track 1 is giving me gritty industrial zone from PS1 game vibes. I think the drums are little strong and I'm not sure the bass/snare drum sounds mesh with the rest of the sounds. I would try to add more variation to the drum pattern. Even taking them out for a little bit would help keep things fresh. Track 2 sounds really nice but I think the drums are also the weakest part here. I think making the drums less present would help.  I would also try playing with the dynamics of the other instruments which feel like they have the same energy throughout the piece.

These seem like two completetly different tracks that aren't really held together or on the theme of the jam.

I like the tracks but at least for me it's kinda hard to relate them with a lake. The 2 tracks are very different and I can't se a cohesive element holding them together. 

Interesting beat tracks you've got here. There a little too beaty for my taste. That second track was a lot better! I liked it a lot. The ambiance and theme were much better. Great work on both.  

I honestly don't see how this sounds very Ambient... It's still a unique take, though!

Definitely very different takes between tracks. I think The Crystalized Lake was heavier than I anticipated but I liked the vibe you were going for. I thought the way the ending stripped back was solid. I thought the stereo sounds on Waltz in the Neon City at 2 minutes was on theme and cool sound design. I liked the distorted/muted bass sound as well, I could hear your style of music really shining on something Space-oriented.