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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Use of Fetish | #9 | 3.750 | 3.750 |
| Presentation | #9 | 3.750 | 3.750 |
| Overall | #11 | 3.438 | 3.438 |
| Gameplay | #12 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
| Use of Theme | #13 | 3.250 | 3.250 |
Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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- I feel like the dialogue was a bit long and the gameplay started to get old after a while. I think it would be good if you eased people onto the mechanics having Ice cream and Cookies show up later and having a opening gameplay without the milk shake then going into the story. Overall pretty good though.
- Excellent. Loved the voice acting and story, it was incredible. I loved the use of the theme and the call-backs to Hannah 'taking control' of her life. I found the minigame to be pretty fun but I found it glitched a couple of times and double-clicked the 'Confirm' button causing me to complete one and then immediately fail the next. Aside from that, amazing.
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I was really impressed by the voice acting and storytelling throughout the game! I was surprised that you were able voice act everything and it was well directed! I think the visual novel part of the game was very well done, showing off the growth with each stage was a good touch. The actual gameplay did make you feel like a minimum wage slave, for better and for worse. I did get to chapter 4 or so playing the game as intended, buying upgrade and such, it did quickly become a slog. I appreciate you adding a button to skip the gameplay but the fact that I felt the need to skip the gameplay makes that section a bit hard to judge with a good score. I do wish there was some visual indication of fullness such as belly getting bigger during the gameplay section but you already made so many art assets it understandable not wanting to have make dozens more. For the theme, I think she is "taking control of her life" but I would have liked to see it a bit more clearly tied to the theme overall. Overall I really liked this as a visual novel, most my gripes are with the game aspect
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+ Simple voice acting adds to the vibes of the game, sounding like regular day to day conversations rather than something that was acted. The ability to skip over the minigame can also help ease potential struggles with later levels.
- The story feels rather simple without much to change things as characters are introduced and not brought up again.
Thank you for the feedback!! It's appreciated and certainly helps me get better. 😀 I already fixed some of this in the updated release that should be out soon, so hopefully more people can enjoy it in an improved state!
a wonderful little game with charming characters, a cute and zanny story, and a fun little minigame. a good intro point into her works and a good stand alone game of it's own merits, give it a try, ya won't regret it
I know author and their other games so can say it's worth to try if you think about it, great game with jokes
I really enjoyed this game! Once you've gotten a couple of upgrades the minigame gets easier, Wonderfully voice acted and the characters were charming :)
Pretty good!
Story is nice and funny. Characters are good. Fully Voice acted!
The minimage is nothing groundbreaking but fun for a time and the option to skip it at any time if one chooses to is great!
Ok I haven't hit the actual gameplay yet but I'm already finding this game to be funny because the jokes are funny, sad, and true. Like entry level job requires years of experience, there are other jokes but I'm not going to spoil the rest.