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how do you guys feel about this game

A topic by kindagoodGamemaker created 8 days ago Views: 393 Replies: 2
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for the last few months i been working on this game i want to see on you feel about the artwork so far btw the artwork is supposed to be simple and like doodling on a piece of paper  :)   


Simple and scribbly is a great aesthetic to go for, but it's hard to parse what's going on. For example, it took me a moment to realize that it's probably a JRPG style line-up of your team (left) vs. monsters right.

I think the characters are fine, but small enough they don't read well. One of the issues I think is a mismatch between character placement and background. The background looks like a cave (?) with stalactites/stalagmites (?) but the party is floating in a column in this passage. A Darkest Dungeon-style horizontal line up where your 2d characters are placed on the floor would help.

seems like gameplay feel will be more important here than artwork so would be great if you can share the playable link here so we can post some meaningful feedback