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Dreamland DemoView game page

The land of your dreams?

Submitted by 404Dash — 8 days, 6 hours before the deadline

Rated by 2 people so far

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Description
This is a demo i would like feedback to know if I should make it a full game, this would be my first big game.

How does this relate to the theme?
The level 1 'lost' the main character is lost in a dream, and if he does not get out HE DOES NOT WAKE Up!!!!! how scary.

Theme Level(s)

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Message from the creator(s)
Based on- fittingly enough, A DREAM where an eyeball talked to meeeeee

Comments

CopperHopperSubmitted2 days ago

I really, REALLY enjoyed this game. This is the one I hope to win. But a few things:

I do not like the player character. He is very annoying, especially when he interrupts Genesis when he’s about to say “I’ll help you leave”
The lie at the end is treated like more of a betrayal than it actually is. Genesis just days “btw your exit is in another castle”, and the player says “what why did you lie to me” (from what I can tell he didn’t)
Gameplay is a little lackluster, which doesn’t bother me but might bother others, so you might work on that unless you are doing the OneShot approach.

With those being said:

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Where's My Needle!?

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THEMHCODERSubmitted3 days ago

This game is quite nice, but lacks a bit of direction at the start, to help gradually guide the player in the game, but I believe the idea you coded up here is great!