Interesting game! I included it in my Strawberry Jam compilation video series, if you'd like to take a look :)

There are plenty of stock assets, although I used the character generator to make the party and around half the NPCs. It saved a lot of time--this represents 20% of what I wanted to accomplish and like 1% of what I would be proud of.

This is very well put together for a first game! I think these are RPG Maker's stock assets, right? I've only ever seen them used in, er, unpolished games, but here they match the quality of the writing. Well done! I hope you try your hand at some larger game-making. :)

Unfortunately I couldn't finish it — I'm not sure if it's RPG Maker or my VM or what, but I always hit a point where the game stops redrawing. :( Probably not your fault.

This feels like a game that got really cramped by the time limit. I nodded along with the plot and then went "that's it?" at what seemed to be the end. Congrats on your first game, though — you made a coherent thing with a beginning, middle, and end. Good job. :)