I'm curious to see what you could make with more time! I enjoy it a lot! Excellent Entry! Good job!
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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Audio | #4 | 3.909 | 4.100 |
| Visuals | #10 | 3.623 | 3.800 |
| How much do you enjoy the game overall? | #19 | 2.956 | 3.100 |
| How well does the game fit the themes? | #19 | 3.814 | 4.000 |
| Overall | #21 | 3.242 | 3.400 |
| Gameplay | #23 | 2.574 | 2.700 |
| Did you make it in 3 hours (put 5 by default) | #29 | 2.574 | 2.700 |
Ranked from 10 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How long was your dev time?
5 hours
Comments
Pretty cool - I always love it when someone comes up with some kind of story for jam games. The voice over is really well done.
The game itself works fine and fits the theme. Just add some polishing, maybe an added challenge and I think its good to go :)
Wow! Totally unexpected. At first I didn't like that there where no movement feeling, also thought that the player was too slow. And then the monologue started.
Very well executed! Add a parallax and some particles to the astronaut's propulsor and the game should be ready to be a nice and polished experience.
By the way, the soundtrack and monologue are yours or you took them from some place. In case it is the second, can I please have an URL to them?
Thank you and keep going!
Wow, this is ambitious for a 3-hour jam! I loved the monologue. I was worried at first about whether or not I would remember what the ship looked liked at the beginning so I could recreate it, but thankfully, it doesn't matter what pieces you put where- which I think is actually a pretty clever tie-in to the message of the monologue.
Mystic game with a very good art but a lack of challenge.
When you are coming back from grabbing a piece, you lose the sense of movement (you don’t see that you are actually moving). A parallax effect could help.
Music would help in the mood.
I love how deep it got so fast. This astronaut is very introspective and we ended with the ship of theseus. Nice story and conversation
Please add more description to what you need to do or how to play the game.


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