Clean, concise pitch that gets me pumped about the game. Great work!
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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Overall Pitch Quality | #1 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Clarity | #2 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Unique Selling Point | #9 | 3.600 | 3.600 |
| Engagement | #10 | 3.533 | 3.533 |
Ranked from 15 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
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- Feedback submitted as Indie Legion.
- I would like to see more emphasis on the unique selling points earlier in the description Programmaticaly geneated unique tracks. Unique speed and direction control system. Quick game sessions.
- Nice emoji usage and straightforward pitch. I wish the game could be in landscape format so you could use up all of that visual real estate.
- Where do I start, I think you are very well-equipped for the pitch and it SNOWS very much, so kudos for that ;) While I personally question why anyone would do sick tricks mid-air during the middle of an avalanche. But it's out-of-the-box and that's precisely what made it different! It got the drop on me, which is more than what I can say about that final surprise XD
- Good tweet and solid press kit. Stand out entry! Suggestions: -- Include key details like Free Game and Available to play now on Web & Android. -- Needs a Call to Action: Include your #1 link and what you want them to do ie Play now on Web / Android. -- Video is great. You can use Twitter Ad Cards to make your video into a link. Join the Indie Legion Discord to find out how.
- Very clear pitch and press kit.
PitchYaPitch Tweet
https://twitter.com/Kanakro13/status/1452251259050811399?s=20
Press Kit Link (DevLog Update)
https://kro13.github.io/presskit
Itch.io Game URL (DevLog Update)
https://kro13.itch.io/kk
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