I think adding some details about what really sets this game apart from others like it would really help get people pumped about playing your game. Awesome job on the trailer! 

Pros: beautiful landscapes in your game. The video did a good job of highlighting where your game takes place.

Cons: I didn't know this was an ARPG or platformer until reading the Press Kit. Highlight these points in the tweet and video itself. I assumed this was a visual novel with romance tracks based on the trailer but not sure anymore after reading the press kit. We also never saw monsters, so wasn't sure how those fit into the game.

Thank you for sharing!

Good tweet and descriptions in your presskit! The video does a good job of showing what environments you'll be in, and a little bit of the writing style. It would be great to see more of the other parts of gameplay too if possible? If not, you could do more slower panning/pitching shots (maybe without the main character) to get the most out of the environments.

A nice pitch..a little bit of polishing and it's up and running..good luck with #PitchYaGame.

Suggested Tweet Edit:

Enter the Realm of Divinos!

Adventure through beautiful landscapes and encounter captivating characters and fascinating monsters on your journey to become a revered hero, or a feared villain.

Wishlist on Steam today! (Ch.1 coming soon)

https://store.steampowered.com/app/1795710/Realm_of_Divinos/

#PitchYaPitch

Realm of Divinos looks beautiful! Love the visuals! 

General Pitch Suggestions:

-- Open your pitch with game specific content over generic blurbs. We don't know anything about the story, characters, history, etc so it's difficult to get emotionally attached or engaged. 

-- Reference your adorable mushroom characters, hunky love interests, etc to get people's attention and interest. See Kena Bridge of Spirits for an excellent example. 

Press Kit Suggestions:

-- Make links clickable (insert link)

-- Focus on the game visuals by expanding each screenshot image to a full slide

-- Wrap all of your content into a Press Kit pack (eg on Google Drive) and include a single downloadable zip file with everything 

lovely trailer, it really gives a vibe of a fae forest of a folklore or something like that!

+ Gorgeous and remarkably calming.
+ Groundbreaking
+ Music is exactly how I imagine a FFXIV title would sound.

- Longer clip and more gameplay~ What a TEASE~~

I like the trailer and the feeling. Also you push the people to follow your events from the start of the twitter.. =) good work

Love it. I saw the description of encountering fascinating characters and was missing the part in the trailer where it actually showed that. Then in the end it did, yes :)

love the trailer! Wish some of the wit from it was in the pitch too 🙂

Really like your new trailer