Great work! Had a lot of fun working through this one, you had a cool concept and did a good job delivering the narrative alongside the platforming! The black and white aesthetic matched the "creepy-pasta" vibes, and the game had a great look. The story was cool and tied into the theme nicely. If I had to ask for any changes, it would be to maybe add a little more polish to the platforming mechanics, like adding some coyote time. But considering the time constraints, I would say this was an excellent project. Nicely done!
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TheGoldenApple's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Theme | #21 | 3.588 | 3.588 |
| Overall | #23 | 3.588 | 3.588 |
| Game Design | #26 | 3.353 | 3.353 |
| Fun | #38 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
Ranked from 34 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Did you use any assets? (Say yes even if the assets were premade by you)
Yes
Discord Username/Usernames
CHEESE#9231
Comments
I really like how you incorporated the theme into your game and its story. The music really helped fuel and drive the atmosphere from cute and light hearted to suspenseful and creepy. I would have loved to see more and I can see a lot of potential in terms of story telling! Awesome work!
I tried the broswer version, what’s convinced. So I downloaded the game and it was good! For a few minutes, I was entirely focus and wanted to know more! Cool game, I really liked the atmosphere. It was special ! :D
i actually found the jump sound very satisfying, especially spamming it in the section with low ceilings :) for my adhd brain the ending moved a little slow but it was interesting!
i realy like this, the atmosphere is incredible
great job
Interesting game, I didn't expect to play a narrativ game so I was a bit surprised but it's really good, the dialogues are interesting, the only problem I have with the game is the jump's sound but good work man !
Thanks alot you guys made an interesting game aswell , and I'm glad you didn't run into any issues while playing the game , also about the jump well...Uhh...I had two sound effects for the jump one that I used in a previous game and one this one , I had too many things in my mind other than the sound effects so I didn't search or make new ones so I apologize about that!
Great game! loved the music and atmosphere. Did you happen to use GLES3 in Godot? If so I believe that may be the source of your graphical issues. Check out https://docs.godotengine.org/en/stable/getting_started/workflow/export/exporting...
Cool levels and the end storyline was moody but fitting to the game. Glad I tried this out.
At some point the game glitched and felt weird.
Maybe you are trying to hide the Matrix from all of us.
Thanks alot :D
1- I wanted to add more levels and stuff believe me I had alot of ideas for this but I had too many things going on irl that prevented me from doing so...
2-I added that delay because I was afraid some people would complain how fast the dialogue rolls (happened to me in previous game)
Thanks alot for hosting this game jam I've had alot of fun working on this project and participating in the jam! :D
Thanks alot for commenting , and I apologize about the experience you had with the game , in the second blurry area you gotta wait for few seconds until the dialogue is over about 10-12 seconds I added this mainly because breaked multiple times whenever it tries to transition so I had to make 10-12 seconds to transition to the next scene :)


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