The visuals are really good and it felt really relaxing, interesting concept and story great job!

Interesting concept. It felt relaxing listening to the ocean and maneuvering the ship.  I couldn't manage to dock on the floating island and couldn't progress after that.

Awesome concept and a great story. It would have been nice to see some chores like shovelling coal to pass the time while traveling between the islands. The visuals are also pretty immersive. Good job!

This is a gorgeous little demo. It's got some problems, but know going into my critique that it comes from love of this little project, and a desire to see it grow into something incredible.

- I couldn't figure out how to dock to the castle island. I docked to the balloon-tree island fine, but the castle island was giving me trouble.
- The story in the cutscenes was undercut by how bland the presentation is. I didn't feel the sense of loneliness and dread I think you were going for, when all I'm seeing is white text on a black background in a casual font.
- It took me a minute to figure out that the handle with the bigger ring was the "centre" one to line up turning with, but I managed it.
- A menu would have been nice, some way to quit the game without having to alt-tab out.

But enough of that - I'm in LOVE with airship games, and this one is no exception! I adore how you did the clouds, in particular - I actually felt like I was flying through clouds! And adding a sound effect for when the ship hits the water was an unexpected touch! Five stars, well done! :)

I'd appreciate it if you could find the time to check out my own entry, The Chronicles of Mega-Mart! It doesn't have airships in it, but it DOES have grand lakes to cross! :)

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