I like it and the potential horror elements that are present. Going into the adventure I would have to know my table to know if any of the things could be triggering and ask without spoiling what may happen. Definitely going to run this.

This is my kind of adventure!!

Lots of random weird things to affect the characters, monsters that are recognizable but different enough to challenge the players ideas about them. 

Great work. 5 stars.

The Wretched template is a nice idea worth developing further, in that there can be more variants outside of this document.  Looking forward to more from you!

Love Dakkar "Boil the water for Ord's sake". Also love the sickness and the art.