I'm just posting a comment here to say that I've just finished the story in Mary Radcliffe's bedroom, and I feel the need to say that I found to be impressively compeling. I don't yet know if we get some callback to it later (EDIT: well, I guess I've got my answer. my best wishes to them both), but something in the story of that poor girl, the way you get guided from one part to the next, and the implications that the end of act 1 provided to it, it was more engaging that I expected.
well done!
