I really liked this! People talk about how the interactivity of a game can have a meaningful impact on interpretation even if the player can't affect the outcome at all--to me, this felt like a good example. Nice emotional short story with a strong sense of physical environment (also after simulated cooking, I'm hungry for a home-cooked meal).

This is a sweet, well written little story and I enjoyed reading it. My main comment otherwise is I wish it had a bit more interactivity.

This was sweet and well written, especially for under four hours.

I wished there were some ways the player could affect the story, but other than that minor matter of personal taste, I have no complaints. Loved the setting and characters!