i audibly gasped at the turning point, what a great display of tragedy! i couldn't help but pick up on the eeriness of the scenario and it gave me chills :'D 

Packed a lot of emotion into an 8 hour project. Nice stuff 

The mood in this was so good! The music change genuinely scared me haha. Very somber, very nice :')

When I hit that pivotal moment, my heart dropped. The fact that you made this in eight hours in insane! All my props.

This was a tragic little tale, I felt so sad for both characters 

The choice of music was really nice. Good job for only 8 hours!

You nailed 'doomed by the narrative'! 

Love it! I was on the edge of my seat when the music changed!