I would take a quarter star only for the font, which could be difficult to read, as lovely and immersive as it was. I'd suggest offering a font choice, if that's possible? The art was gorgeous, the sound effects appropriate and non-intrusive, and the music was lovely, all going wonderfully with the story.
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