I like the distorted sounds you've chose and there is an impressive loudness in your track (that's not easy to do)! For a little bit of constructive criticism, I really like the selection of sounds you chose, but there is a tinny quality that I feel dominates over the rest of the frequency spectrum; I think an EQ cut in the high-mids/presence range (or potentially even the 1k-2k region) could really benefit the song while still keeping the vibe you were going for! I really like your interpretation of the theme, I could imagine the wide grin of the cactus as I listened (in a good way)! Really cool submission!

Very creative rhythm. I like the little melody.