Whoo! I asked for a detailed critique and I got it! Thank you very much for the detailed explanation of each track!
In fact, creating such a large number of tracks and having little experience is what caused all the problems you mentioned).
I seem to have made the biggest mistake of building a large soundtrack: Listeners have to go through 20 minutes of boring ambient before getting to the “interesting” part. And also the point is that I was learning a lot while making this soundtrack, and it so happens that the quality level of the first tracks and the last tracks are VERY different (Right down to the trivial volume and sound quality). I wanted to remake them... but I realized this when a little more than half of the deadline had passed. I couldn't cut them out completely because it would “break” the original idea. I ended up with a very uneven soundtrack with a lot of unfinished ideas and mistakes.... Maybe I shouldn't have set myself such an ambitious goal? :)
My main stylistic mistake is trying to inappropriately combine orchestral instruments with other musical instruments.
The main technical error is problems with excessive sound volume at some points in the soundtrack.
I quite agree with the monologue: this “track” exists solely for the final completion of the “story”. It's just that I really wanted to make the soundtrack complete, which is why I had to add it in
Anyway - thanks so much for the detailed review! I'm very pleased with it. I'll try to make fewer mistakes next time, heh. I'll have more experience, though)
P.S. Yes, Rest Zone is a sub to Queen's Archives. Heh)