I loved the bass line. What a wonderful loop you've created with the progression of instrument inputs. Section two holds the thematic feel well. But the sax was a wonderful surprise. Congratulations! A silly detail of mine: I missed the music spreading out more in the mix. Not the volume itself, but the width.

Bass and drums are so good! The keyboard is a bit too loud and not doesn't "go" anywhere, so the whole middle section feels a bit empty and repetitive, but when the sax enters it totally changes the mood, very good!

Love that bass! Can definitely hear echoes of the original (in a good way!). I like the clarity of the melody in the middle and very cool use of the saxophone. Only thing I would suggest is maybe a little more rhythmic variety at the end of the loop, but otherwise really nice!