You asked for deeper feedback, so I'll just be brutal with every improvement I can think of.
-There were misspellings of words
-Speech bubble filling with text should probably make a noise, anything from animal crossings noises to full on voice acting.
-Art style is rough and inconsistent. Not really much to say, I'm sure you already know it isn't up there with the greatest looking games of all time, but that does mean it technically will always have room for improvement until it gets there.
-Should probably have a prompt telling you how to advance speech bubbles.
-May be on my end, but audio was a little weird. There could also be more and better sound effects.
-Too much dialog to start the game, I want to play, not just read.
-Dialog annoyingly keeps popping up and stopping movement.
-Dialog is too repetitive.
-Gameplay felt like chores and wasn't engaging. I was dreading do all the chores again at one point.
-Rapidly skipping dialog resulted in me accidently clicking things I didn't mean to. (annoying)
-When you leave the console, you cannot reenter it. You have to leave its proximity and then re-approach to use it again. (annoying)
-Controls were weird using Q and E. Not easy or intuitive, but maybe it's just because I've never played a game with that control scheme.
-Interacting with objects was annoying with the range and angle you had to have to interact. If it was easier it might ruin the challenge, but I think that there must be a more fun way to make it challenging than the control scheme found here.
-There just wasn't much in the game, I didn't really try to explore either planet though. There's just a couple buildings and the ship from what I saw. It would be better to have more details and structures to flesh out the world.
I'm hoping this feedback helps.
My time was around 1330 by the way.