lmfao incredible deployment of piss christ

this feels like a window into a slightly alien world.  i'm piss-shy like you wouldn't believe and have peed in a publicly-accessible bathroom like three times in my entire life, so i've developed the bladder capacity of an elephant.  even in my own home i will hit the point of needing to pee and then forget about it for several hours because it's just not that urgent.

so the politics around needing to ask permission to pee while you're in school would never cross my mind (even though you're obviously correct about all of it) because i didn't.  i just didn't.  as far as i can remember i never once used a school bathroom, all the way through the end of high school.  i would simply enter a sort of bio-stasis for eight hours.  same thing with crappy entry-level jobs.  it just didn't come up.

so i guess thanks for writing this, because it's one of those things people don't really write about very much even though (or because?) it seems universal, but nothing ever truly is.

i appreciate the nod to that phenomenon of prepubescent fascinations becoming kinks later on, or whatever is actually happening there.  that happened to me as well (albeit with different things) and i'm so curious what my brain was actually doing there, but of course it's hard to talk about.

the cam intermission was surprisingly vulnerable and then damn the last act really got me.  it's funny how there's a sort of buildup from typo-laden chat logs, through what's mostly external narration, and then into internal narration that wrenches your guts completely independently of how much you're here for the omorashi, so it's almost a surprise when it happens.  there's a depth and thoughtfulness that's hard to find and also hard to write.

so.  well done.  damn.

Compelling and emotional and transgender in a way that brings its subject matter along affectionately rather than transcending it, which strengthens the experience in a really unexpected and fun way. I'm not a piss kinkster and I still am not, but if anything could make me one, it would be this. Be queer, be unapologetically who you are, and piss wherever you can. 

Oh, this game took me on a journey. The game is earnest in its story, and I love how gender, kink, societal expectations and personal struggles all wind around each other to create a compelling narrative with something to say. There were also some really poignant lines - I relate to and love the poetry of “The stage we perform on is the screen. The body is transformed into light and pixels, displayed across a monitor, flesh becomes intangible.’ And that bit near the end, of “It’s over and he’s still here”? Made me smile, honestly.

Echoing that colour coding the characters would be nice - I did have to stop a couple of times to mentally distinguish who was who. It also took me a second to find the links to the next page when I first started the game, due to them being the same colour as the rest of the text.

Engaging with blatantly and unapologetically queer fiction is good for the soul, and this was very good for it indeed.

Very cool story! The writing style and story is a nice mix of both comedy and personal introspective. If I had to critique, with it being mostly text, some color-coding with the character names would be useful, since I found it a bit hard to remember who was who, at least in the beginning.

this emoticon right here -->> ‘,:o) <<-- is so powerful

For real though, what a great story. personally i explored WS a good while back and came away mostly ambivalent, and anything i get out of it is a completely different set of things to what these guys do, and it was cool to read different perspectives on it and the way it connects to bigger ideas for them. Truly it is folly to make assumptions about why someone has the kinks they do.

Omorashi is absolutely not my thing either but it was just really nice watching these two faggots explore it together. Like KDRGN said the different presentation styles are a really effective device to let us into the heads of both the characters, and to me the whole "when i leave, this will all be over" thing is painfully familiar. It's rough having to go back to normal life after being around fellow perverts. I'm glad it worked out for the two of them.

How nice! This isn't my scene at all, but I do feel like I understand the kink a little better now. The various shifts in presentation are also pretty cool. I appreciate these boys and I would support inviting the piss union into the big labour federation.

This entire game is a spiritual experience

It is exactly what the soul needs

10/10, no notes

this is the kind of earnest art that fills the soul with hope and love (and piss, of course)

Workers of the world piss on each other

The only thing you have to lose is your shame