The food puns were full of wit & a delight to read ("Take this with a pinch of me" was my favorite). The "bad responses" from Dr. Pineapple gave me a great laugh even if I felt too bad to go down those dialogue trees! I GASPED when Pizza showed up on screen, loved that Dr. Pineapple's last Chapter was revolved around his relationship!
Great job with this! I'd get a sticker of Dr. Pineapple smiling, he looks so sweet :)