I think this game has a lot of potential for a fun, story-driven puzzle game. IMO, spend some time seeing where you could take this. Could totally see a full release from this idea!
Oh, I really appreciate your words and feedback ^^. I don´t have much time to make a full project of this (not now), but this kind of projects help me to improve my experience making games and tell stories, emotions… I am absolutely in love with the creative and narrative potential of videogames :P