Really loved the vibes of this! The music was perfect and the art fit just as well. Also loved the mention of the "after ample therapy". Great job, and thank you for sharing!!

Great. I didn't think it was possible to have this kind of atmosphere (sounds and graphics) in a browser game.

I love a good revenge story. It really felt like I was living out a Johnny Cash song.

The music and sound effects go perfect with the game, I think this is the first time I play a choose you adventure game with music, and It really improves the gamefeel

I enjoyed the art stile with the hand drawn images,  you could make the gui a little bit better like a better main menu cause you want the first person for somebody to see while playing your game look good. 

The music was a good choice, the gui could be shown without scrolling down. it should start off showing the chapters and then it tells you what the chapter is about then  you can play. 

The entire choose your own path thing is cool. The sound effects are okay but i enjoy the visual novel aspect with all the text. 

You could make the endings longer though and I was immersed into the story. I think that each ending should take about 20 minutes to get, or even more. You should create a screen for when you unlock a new chapter because I didn't even know I was on the 3rd chapter already. The main menu should have so much more stuff, achievements, and an ending list.

Positives:

• Nice sound design; the situational background music and sound effects really added to the mood and feeling on the story
• Very competent writing. Good motivation for the main character at the start, sufficient backstory, and the story flowed well and didn't overstay its welcome.
• Hand-drawn pictures also do well in immersing the player in the story

Potential improvements if you choose to continue working on it:

• Text formatting could lend to polish (i.e. different font sizes for headers, different styles when characters are speaking, perhaps even animating some text effects for emphasis)
• There were a few places in the text that sounded anachronistic like talking about "dumbass coworkers", "peanut butter jar", "chocolate cake", "friendly neighborhood cowboy", "first-degree homicide" (some of these visuals are hard to imagine in a wild west setting). Although these things are perfectly fine if you're aiming for more tongue-in-cheek humor

Loved the sounds and graphics you added, they really tell a story!

Innovation – Unique artstyle and a new story I havent heard before! Very creative, nice visual novel!
Fun – For me personally I don't play a lot of visual novels and found myself skipping through some dialogue. Still had fun with the parts I did read tho!
Graphics –Nice artstyle! Would love to see more!
Audio – The music and sound effects are banging! Don't change them, they really create the atmosphere!
Polish – Smooth ;)

Also thanks for checking out my game as well! 

Nice, I like the aesthetics.

its a short and well written choose your own adventure game that starts with a bang

the visuals are very cool and the audio works well with the story

"We are always connected"

Very cool storyline, I built a similar one but made too many choices yours feels more polished.

You can check mine it's called Crimson Shadows

Very nice visual novel!

• Innovation – A standard visual novel, but the black background with white sketchy lines is a unique look.
• Fun – Interesting story, and the ambient sounds and music really helped keep me reading.
• Graphics – Nice style for sure.  The main menu needs different font and phrase. "NOW LOADED" is an odd way to start. Just show that nice art piece full screen and a nice start button.
• Audio – Nice sounds indeed!
• Polish – Very good compared to most game jam visual novels I see.  (most are dead silent or just have a bad music track on loop hehe)

Great job completing a full and fun game!  Please check out my game if you like Metroidvanias or platformers :D