It feels like there's a whole lot of ideas here and a lot of them are pretty interesting and catchy, like my favorite part is from around 0:50 -1:05 where it feels like there is a very strong musical idea. It's just that there are a lot of musical ideas that I (((personally))) feel could be further fleshed out into their own songs which might help it each one stand out with their own identity a bit more. It is very jazzy and jazz does tend to cycle through musical ideas very quickly though so I totally get the intention. Good work overall!